Friday, September 4, 2009

Of Doubt & Trust


It never ends, I wish it never does
These last few moments of doubt and trust…

No more it matters if I win...
And it doesn’t matter if I win a lil less
It is meant to be broken, destined for an end
I see it going…was never mine
It never goes, I wish it never does
The last few moments of doubt and trust…

No more it matters if I will miss it
And it doesn’t matter if I ll miss it a lil more
Yesterday has disappeared, tomorrow will too..
I see this day fading away soon
It never fades, I wish it never does..
The last few moments of doubt and trust…

The dawn is elusive, the dusk is too
A Fathomless abyss between me and you
Where the doubt is charming, and the trust is too!

7 comments:

mk said...

beautiful poetry pooja...philosophical touch!
clever use of word..
loved the post...keep penning!!

Isha said...

very deep,as always ..nicely worded

Nithya said...

hmmmm..... the poem describes a state of mind....confused and sad but still full of hope. Now i wondering whether it is your state of mind or not...??????
Full of hidden meanings..... ;)

ani_aset said...

aaah love does that to you haan where you have started loving doubt and trust at the same time...beautiful self conversation pooja..and it was a very long break :)

pooja said...

:) yes indeed a long break, thnks ...nd thanku sha, nitya and mk!

Navi said...

Came through Isha' Blog... A very beautiful portrayal of the conflict of emotions within... :) nice one.. :) Blogrolling you...

Raj said...

doubt and trust.
when you say that, dont friends and relationships come in mind?
i dont know, mine do. :)

and yet when you think of it, when you doubt the right thing you miss something you didnt intend to. sigh. philosophy.

A Fathomless abyss between me and you... see... :( me and you. its always that.