
I give in, I have to rush – the corporate butchers do not understand that there’s much more to life than to earn a living….do I?...may be not! none of us do …guess the “implicit compulsions” are more potent than the explicit ones.
At 9 in the morning one of the busiest roads to travel in the city is the “hi-tech”, where thousands of techies drag themselves to work each day – decked up, wearing the rectangular access/ID cards around their necks which reduce each one of them into a number, but does give them some sort of “identity” we all crave for.
The traffic is totally jammed. I am happy as it gives me some more time and a valid reason to reach office late. Still at the same spot as I was 10 mins ago, the music in my ipod starts giving me a headache. I put it off and look around...
A pretty girl in a rickshaw doing and re-doing her make-up with complicated colored pencils…impatiently looking at her watch time and again…An old woman wearing a faded saree in another rickshaw...contemplating in silence, in no hurry to reach anywhere…
A white school bus stuffed with kids- all of them tearing each others clothes apart….a group of younger children happily selling flowers, thanking the traffic jam to give them maximum client exposure.
A black Mercedes (something to die for) and a disturbingly handsome man on the back seat (something to live for: P) …too engrossed in his palmtop to notice anything around… A cycle with 27 chickens on each side tied upside down …the fastest one to twist and turn and make its way out of the commotion...
A “formally dressed” mid- aged man on a pulsar continually convincing someone on phone getting ready for his sales target …. A old bike - 3 friends , adjusting themselves on a red caliber having the best laugh of their lives…
A rainy morning….a standstill corner of a fast paced city made us all look like the “self- absorbed” characters of a similar story – ever flowing , ever moving from someone, something, somewhere to someone, something ,elsewhere. It is few explicit stops in life like these , when I wonder how everything around is indeed beautifully implicit!
15 comments:
nice observation...good to know that you know that most of the things we want are implicit and the ones which are explicit, we realize after a long time that, they weren't that important.
You know what, a flowing river never comes back to the same place and so is life's moments...we keep moving forward discovering things as we flow in the river of life...
:-)
Amazing and finest obsevation. this indicate pooja deep thought process.In one word i say" Superverb" keep it uppppppppppppppppppppp
Is that hyderabad :(...the city very close to my heart...
ok ok very well written :D..does that pic belong to you...its very well shot
I love the way you make me visualize the entire scene. You are very descriptive in your writings, which is the best part.
well about the content- i would say the most tough part is to figure out wat is implicit and wat is not. if we figure that out half the battle is won. :)
@ sha and kk thanks !
@ raghu ...yes indeed its ever flowing , wish we cud hold it still fr sometime
@ ani_aset ..yes thats hyd ..the pic is courtsey google :)
@ nithya..thanks , u never miss out reading my blog and then making a fine point always after that .thanks :)
..right, which is why I often say,
Live life, as an action, not a reaction.
Imagery of the finest order! I do not know if you have done some course on literature but as a student of literature I must tell you that your writings as as visual as it can get...keep them coming!
thank u.. m relly flaterred :) cing u after a long long time!
well blog after long time.bt nice one as usual ;)we always realize late thin line of difference b/w implict n explict ;)
ur descriptive writing makes the reader enjoy the same atmosphere for few seconds...
Thank u :)
Amazing n very observant !!
One of the best ones that I have read so far..
:)
rectangular access/ID cards around their necks which reduce each one of them into a number, but does give them some sort of “identity” we all crave for.
irony.
after reading this post i think i finally undrestand a little about you too.
you like to just stop and kindoff smell the roses in a way.
like here, the description of all the people, noticing the various traits (mercedes, auto, the old lady not being in a hurry) everyone would not have otherwise.
delighful. :)
you do notice just so that you can write about it dont you? (hope not) :P
ps: the question is actually out of question. you notice everything. and then write about it. writing is a part of it right?
ok. i m not beautifully baffled. :P
At the end of each line in this post, I wanted to hear a sound: CLICK! :)
Would have loved to capture each of them with my camera!
Awesomeness!!!!!!
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